8/24/2009

Today's Update

Revision Angst


As of 6:00 PM central time, I am on page 188 of 400. Here's a peek at my favorite segment from today's revision:

"Why is it I suddenly feel I'm on the more normal end of the freak spectrum?"

"I keep trying to tell you normal is relative," he said. "Do you need a second?"

I needed a millennium.

2 comments:

  1. Awesome dialogue! You're doing so well on your revisions! Should I be bringing you hot chocolate and a lemon bar tomorrow to fuel you?

    Oh. Wait. Then we'd talk for three hours. Never mind.

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