5/18/2009

Hook Us

My first page is up at The Five Randoms! Be gentle!

http://thefiverandoms.livejournal.com/

2 comments:

  1. I thought it was great - definitely got me interested! I agree with the gal who said she thought it could be stronger if you hold off on that first part about being crazy - I think it's a great passage, too - but people will really go, woah, what's this about, if they read the next section first. Good luck!
    -Stephanie

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