4/07/2009

My First Two Pages


ARE BEING REVISED!

PLEASE TO FORGIVE?







9 comments:

  1. "...through her stomach..."??! Ohh! I can't wait to read more. You're so talented, sweet girl. Dontchew forget it!

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  2. Ahh, the famous last words of Rhett Butler.

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  3. My sweet pearly girl - thank you for your compliment! I'll let you read more anytime you wish, but it makes me want to grab an extra barf bag. Hem, hem. My prose pales in comparison to yours - Gerry and Sandy would never approve - it's commercial fiction! GASP! But the older I get, the more I need to laugh. C'est la vie...I'm sure those are someone's last words!

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  4. Wow this is really good stuff. I'm glad I finally got a chance to read it. Thanks for sharing. I wish you had your own website that you could publish this on!

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  5. Thank you, April! Why? Because the first 240 times you read it weren't enough? And wait - aren't you my web admin?

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  6. As a writer, you have such an amazing voice. There's no doubt I was intrigued and wanted more. So, when can I have more? :)

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  7. Whoa! That really grabbed me. Whoa. So, Scarlett O'Hara's ghost (or some reasonable facsimile) inhabits this building, and your main character can see her? No wonder she's not impressed by the weather!

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  8. Ahh, the famous last words of Rhett Butler.

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